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This would be good for a lava-and-ice stage. It sounds like running and setting lava and steam among the melting ice floes...

Interesting, reminds me a bit of an old MOD tune, "star technologies".

I don't understand this to be punk, but it's quite nice for that. As you say it's kind of sketchy, sometimes your voice is too quiet to make out, sometimes it drowns out the guitar, and isn't always quite in sync, but as you say with some work this could be quite interesting. Keep chipping at it.

Keegs responds:

Yeah, I feel it. I only did three vocal passes so everything's pretty sketchy. But like I said, I only had a few hours to hammer this out! :p

Very fun.

An incredible feeling of nostalgia for something I'd never heard before. Happy to hear this isn't the only project like this you're up to.

As for style, if it's not rock, 'instrumental rock' maybe?

Devastus responds:

Possibly yeah, though at the same time it's more disco-oriented with the basic beat and electronic stuff in it. I reckon there is no correct solution to this mystery :P

Glad you like it!

I admit I was skeptical. "Another cheerful Waterflame. How many patterns before it becomes Race Around the World, again?"

It did not.

It has elements of your instrumental STYLE yet DOESN'T emulate the patterns, rhythms, and arrangements of 'race around the world' or even resemble them. My brain resynced every time it broke the mold and failed to follow the pattern I predicted.

It's something new. It's great. :)

The drums seemed a little excessive until I read the description, that's an 80's sounding drum track all right.

Waterflame responds:

Thank you! Glad to hear that! This is one of those tracks where I really tried to expand and break out, try something new, So its great to hear that It comes across :)

The introduction needs work... about two minutes in is when I would've started the song.

Then it became real interesting, though.

Not bad, but the excess reverb makes it mushy in places, and the complete and total lack of percussion kind of robs it of presence.

I will be blunt -- in trying to make this your own, you've thrown out everything which made the original fun but didn't really add much else.

The song has no melody, just a single repeating pattern and some boilerplate wub-wubs (to reassure the listener it's actually dubstep). I can only assume the very out-of-place violin solo of the actual melody is so you can still call this "Gyges".

To be fair, the sheer energy of the original is very hard to catch.

The feedback I'm getting here has inspired me to clean up and post more of my small library of music, which I make as a hobby. So far I'm (de?)composing using old-fashioned tools like FastTracker II. If you know better free tools, I'm all ears!

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