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It's got an interesting rhythm, the bassline really sets it off, and as always I love your instruments. You found a bass that has some bite to it without being overwhelming.

Also, it's rare that I like the spinner someone's put on their song :)

Your use of the voice track is much better placed and more subtle in this version. Very nice.

The change at 2:30 is pretty drastic. With the percussion vanishing it's almost difficult to tell it's a continuation and not a new song. Just a tiny bit of the old beat would help bridge the two I think.

And it keeps changing and morphing and remains interesting.

All in all I like it a lot.

Again, the words kind of get in the way. A foreground melody would be interesting with this.

This overcomes the main prob lem with quite a lot of breakbeat songs -- too short. In fact this is one of the longest songs I've seen on Newgrounds.

The muppet voice kind of ruins it in spots unfortunately.

Like DuttonSaysHi says, each time you write another instrumental you leave the mould a bit further. I didn't hear any of your familiar arrangements at all at first, though you unfortunately fall back into the old habits 2:04 onwards. I'll give this two reviews.

First section: You've got wonderful taste in how you pick your instruments as usual. This mixture of traditional and synthetic ones and your occasionally strong, occasionally subtle percussion always keeps your simple but interesting melody and accompaniment bright and clear. A more complex or varying melody would be interesting to hear. 4/5.

Second section: The percussion and orchestral hits kind of take over, not leaving a lot of room for the melody, which blends mushily with the orchestral accompaniment. You've also got hints of the original melody here and there, but they're mostly difficult to notice over the percussion. Overall there's not one theme to keep the attention, it becomes a bit of a jumble. 2/5.

I've missed your darker tunes :)

This one seems somewhat reminiscent of another one you wrote, 'Cannibal', but much smoother. Better and further developed, more mature and at times genuinely disturbing. It made the hair on my arms stand on end.

Individually, the songs are interesting though short. Together, they don't really work. It's like someone changes the channel at 0:25...

I really like how you turned industrial sounds into a melody. A lot of the time it's just a bunch of extra-clangy percussion, but you made a melody out of it.

A somewhat short melody, though. The song seems a bit unfinished.

ErikKaufman responds:

Thank you for review man =)

Initially it was a short intro(0:15) for a gameshow video, and when I was start to make full song I have some problems with extended version, and make it as I can. Maybe I had to make it from the beginning :D

Yet another rousing re-arrangement of 'race around the world'.

Waterflame responds:

i thik thats kinda harsh in the long run. its the scales i like. why am i expected to do anything diffrent that what i enjoy? i am capable of doing other things, but this scale is the one i have the most fun with and, after all, i do make music mostly for my own amusement.

I don't know what it is, but I like it.

bluebooblue responds:

Thankkkk you!!!

The feedback I'm getting here has inspired me to clean up and post more of my small library of music, which I make as a hobby. So far I'm (de?)composing using old-fashioned tools like FastTracker II. If you know better free tools, I'm all ears!

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